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Ghost [Yamato curse] Chapter one by MrEdgyart Ghost [Yamato curse] Chapter one by MrEdgyart
Here we go ! the first chapter is there :) just follow the link and you will read it, i will give a download link later and don't hesitate to share it with people who like Yamato and naruto :) 
good reading and some feed back will be great to improve the story .Llama Emoji-66 (Orly) [V3] 

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MrEdgyart Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Professional General Artist
thank you for all the comments and i working on chapter two and improve my style :) by the way if someone want help me to correct my english mistake i will be very glad ! jsut drope me a not and i will send you the pages thank again and again the pages will be better :) 
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Quantit Featured By Owner May 1, 2014
What a promising start! Illustrations are amazing... (There are indeed a couple of spelling and English mistakes).
Look forward to reading the next chapter :)
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MrEdgyart Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Professional General Artist
let's see what happen next :) 
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G-A-AnimeFan4 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is so detailed and amazing!!
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MrEdgyart Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Professional General Artist
thank you so so much 
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G-A-AnimeFan4 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
you're welcome^^
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NessaSan Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Your style is so cool.
It really fits a story like that.
I love Yamatos face on page nine, bottom panel. xD
Can't wait to read on.

Sometimes teh english isn't exactly correct I think,
but maybe thats just. me. :P
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MrEdgyart Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Professional General Artist
thank you very much
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Hirfael9 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014
I finished it a few minutes ago and I love it!
The story is exciting and great and I really like Yamato's monologes and memories you got his personality well. His teammates Akina and Hikaru are cool and likeable, they're a good team. (Lol I always thought about my character when I read Hikaru's name, there is only a little difference between their names XD)
And your drawing style is amazing, I love how you use lights and shadows and how you draw  mokuton-style and wood. It was interesting to read this story in your style I mean it's different from manga style (it remembers me to the american comics a little) but it was so enjoyable and great and I was happy to read it in your style.
Congrats! ^^ I can't wait to see what will happen next ^^
(And I wish my English would be better so I could tell my thoughts better ^^""")
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MrEdgyart Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Professional General Artist
thank you so much i will improve it more and more :)
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Hirfael9 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014
You're welcome! ^^
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leilaleiz Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
it's a pure beauty!!! love your style man!
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MrEdgyart Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Professional General Artist
thank you very much 
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silverwoodpack Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I just finished to read it! SÚriously, At the beginning, I was like: Wow! This is different from the real manga because of the drawing style. But it's easy to read and want to read more and more pages! I was absorbed by the first chapter, even if the action is not already here! Even if the characters are not in the same style, I like your style on them! It make them looks a little more like real humans. 

Keep going on the good work! I can't wait for the next chapter! :la:
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MrEdgyart Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Professional General Artist
thank you i hope i will finish this part 2 i took a lot of others project in the same time :) 
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silverwoodpack Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I hope you will finish it too! :D
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silverwoodpack Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'll go read it! :3
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